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Bonjour, je dois rechercher un animal du WWF et dire le problème ou et pourquoi il disparait ?
J'ai fais mon texte en Anglais. Pouvez vous me dire s'il y a des fautes et me les corriger . Merciiii d'avance !!!! 

The scientific name is Pan paniscus Its size is 70 to 100 cm The male weighing 45 kg. The female weighing 30 kg They eat plants, seeds, bark, fruits, shoots and invertebrates Their life expectancy is about 40 years They live along the Congo River in the Democratic Republic of Congo.   There remain between 10,000 and 20,000 individuals. Bonobos are highly threatened: their numbers have halved in the past 20 years. Poachers illegally hunt to sell as bush meat, as pets or for their supposed medicinal properties (they are used in traditional medicine in particular). They are also victims of war. But the greatest threat is the destruction of the rainforest for farming (crops, livestock ...) If deforestation continues at the same rate, it is believed that the bonobo has completely disappeared within 50 to 70 years.

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    Its scientific name is Pan paniscus and its size is 70 to 100 cm. The male's weight is 45 kg. The female's weight 30 kg. They eat plants, seeds, bark, fruits, and invertebrates. Their life's expectancy is about 40 years. They live along the Congo River in the Democratic Republic of Congo. The remained specy is between 10,000 and 20,000 individuals. Bonobos are highly threatened: their numbers have decreased in the past 20 years. Poachers illegally hunt them for the meat, to make them pets or for their supposed medicinal properties. (They are used in traditional medicine in particular). They are also victims of war. But the greatest threat is the destruction of the rainforest for farming (crops, livestock, etc.) If deforestation continues at the same rate, it is believed that the bonobo will completely disappear within 50 to 70 years.


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