Pouviez-vous me dire si j'ai fait des erreurs merci d'avance!. Dear Sir or Madam, Your advertisement in 'The Time news' for the advertisementposition as a teach
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Pouviez-vous me dire si j'ai fait des erreurs merci d'avance!.
Dear Sir or Madam,
Your advertisement in 'The Time news'
for the advertisementposition as a teacher sparked my interest.
Please find the details of my advertisementapplication for the position
in the enclosed advertisementresume and let me briefly explain how I can contribute to your department.
With over 15 years of advertisementexperience in teaching English and French in Paris, Norwich and Inverness,
I believe my qualifications would match your advertisementrequirements.
In my advertisementcurrent position I manage a team whose main purpose is to find the best way to teach different languages to young pupils.
My advertisementsuperiors and the students' parents have recognized that I have found an easy method which develops my students' skills.
I would advertisementdefine myself as serious and dynamic,
I am able to advertisementrelate well to people and believe it is time for me to move to a university like yours in order to pursue my teaching career and to bring my best to your students.
If you are advertisementinterested or if you have any questions
I am advertisementavailable
for a recruitment advertisementinterview.
I thank you for taking the time to advertisementconsider my resume and I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully.
Lucas Braigny
Dear Sir or Madam,
Your advertisement in 'The Time news'
for the advertisementposition as a teacher sparked my interest.
Please find the details of my advertisementapplication for the position
in the enclosed advertisementresume and let me briefly explain how I can contribute to your department.
With over 15 years of advertisementexperience in teaching English and French in Paris, Norwich and Inverness,
I believe my qualifications would match your advertisementrequirements.
In my advertisementcurrent position I manage a team whose main purpose is to find the best way to teach different languages to young pupils.
My advertisementsuperiors and the students' parents have recognized that I have found an easy method which develops my students' skills.
I would advertisementdefine myself as serious and dynamic,
I am able to advertisementrelate well to people and believe it is time for me to move to a university like yours in order to pursue my teaching career and to bring my best to your students.
If you are advertisementinterested or if you have any questions
I am advertisementavailable
for a recruitment advertisementinterview.
I thank you for taking the time to advertisementconsider my resume and I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully.
Lucas Braigny
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Dear Sir or Madam,
Your advertisement in 'The Time news'
For the advertisement position as a teacher sparked my interest.
Please find the details of my advertisement application for the position
in the enclosed advertisement resume and let me briefly explain how I can contribute to your department.
With over 15 years of advertisement experience in teaching English and French in Paris, Norwich and Inverness,
I believe my qualifications would match your advertisement requirements.
In my advertisement current position I manage a team whose main purpose is to find the best way to teach different languages to young pupils.
My advertisement superiors and the students' parents have recognized that I have found an easy method which develops my students' skills.
I would advertisement define myself as serious and dynamic,
I am able to advertisement relate well to people and believe it is time for me to move to a university like yours in order to pursue my teaching career and to bring my best to your students.